You Surrond me,
You Engulf Me,
Until Nothings Left.
You hurt me,
You break me,
It's a Bitter-Sweet Death,
The feel of your skin,
The Look in my eyes,
The look starts to fade with all of your lies.
You Sooth me,
You Save me,
Spiraling 'round the bend.
You'll cry,
You'll be scared,
Cause you caused my end.
I wrote this the other day in History, because History is the class I think about things in. Usually I don't post things with such a deep meaning to me online (ex: Facebook and Blogger ). So your probably asking why I'm posting it then? Because I want to get my point across to the two people this is about...and because Chels, forced me. HaHa
4 comments:
Very nice poem! =)
It's really deep and meaningful...
you could become a famous poet!
JJ this is really, really good. Keep it up :]
JJ thats really good. Just keep on thinking in History class. You never know what will come up you know?
JJ!!!!!!!!!!,
I really didnt think you would put your thoughts out there. Usually you keep everything to yourself, or you only vent to your closest friends. C'mon, i have known you since Kindergarten, and you never put your thoughts out there like that. I love how you think in history class. Seriously who can stay awake and pay attention in Mr. Roth's class. I know i cant. lol. I always get easily distracted. And you are always talking about Broadway shows or Disney, and thats okay, because i have now become obsessed with disney and Broadway shows, on top of being obsessed with dance. lol.
-Bri
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